Opening sequence with audio

This is our opening sequence with audio. I think the audio and strings fits well with your filming and editing. I do think that the Iphone ringtone in the film is too long and too pure, it ringtone should be muffled as if it was on the ground. We are also yet to put some bird sounds throughout the film in particular when he is opening his eyes. We need to edit a few things out as well, we were told that some titles are too long. The film is only 1:32 minutes long, which is 30 seconds short of two minutes. Two minutes is the minimum time we need for the opening sequence. We have decided to add some additional shots into the first few shots, these shots will include of more shots of the landscape, in other words more establishing shots. This should hopefully put some more time onto our opening sequence. These establishing shots would include of shots of our setting, perhaps the sea, the forest, the hills.