Mise en Scene

Costumes/Attire
  1. Main Character-Dark coloured clothing to show depression and unhappiness
  2. Main Character-Dark Hoodies- Wearing a hood to show that he doesn't want to be seen
  3. Main Character- Not very well dressed to show that he doesn't feel to make the effort.
  4. Other Characters-Wearing vibrant clothes to show the contrast in the Main characters dark clothing and the upbeat colourful clothing of the other characters.

Props
  1. Book- With many pages so we can the flicking animation
  2. Bed
  3. Spa scents
  4. Boxing gloves
  5. cucumber slices
  6. Pillow
  7. Cream
Location
  1. School classroom
  2. A park preferably The byes in Sidmouth
  3. My house (Matt)

Feedback on our pitch


Positives

  • Well presented (on Prezi)
  • Good plot
  • Original Idea
  • Creative Ideas
  • Lots of good enigmas
  • Good synopsis
Negatives
  • Wouldn't pay to see it in a cinema
  • The audience didn't get to hear much about the story (we didn't explain it very well) 
  • The Narrative didn't come across very strong
  • We didn't establish who our target audience was
  • Wasn't clear enough
  • We red straight off the board instead of talking to the audience
  • Didn't go into enough depth
As you can see from the Positives and Negatives, there more negatives then positives. To change this we hope to re do our Pitch, where we can explain it further and go into more depth about the Narrative, the Plot, where it is set and have more enigmas.
Our Pitch




This is our presentation on our pitch that we presented to the class. We did this presentation on Prezi.
Our Anamatic



This is our anamatic for our final task, it is a storyboard anamatic.